Sunday, April 25, 2010

What's your Dramatic Moment

A teenager boy, John, likes this girl, Nicole, and has liked her since they were in middle school and they are now in the 11th grade. He and she are just friends and he always tries to get her attention but she does not because she has a boyfriend. He one day gets the nerve up to talk to her when her boyfriend comes up and threatens him not to talk to his girlfriend, so he just walks away. One day they get into a big fight and John decides to try to cheer her up; he does and she asks if he would like to hang out with her after school and he accepts. While they are hanging out she starts to realize he has always been there for her and feels like she is falling for him. While walking home she leans in to kiss him and he gets all happy and excited when the sprinklers in the park turn on and get him wet. Then once they are at her doorstep she leans into to kiss him again when her boyfriend pulls up into the driveway and she sees him and runs over to her boyfriend and he is there left alone again. The things that will emphasize their dramatic moment are sweat running down his face, the girl leaning into him and holding his hand, close up on their faces and dim lighting.

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