Editing Demo Critique

1. Concept/ Script
I think my editing concept demos do a good job of demonstrating the concepts. They consist mostly of the concept with of course other concepts as well. A problem I had with the demos was time. We did not have much time to shoot because our schedules conflicted. Another problem was that we both had our own ideas and could not illustrate it to each other so it did not come out as well as it could of.

2. Camera Work
Our shots for the demos were average. If we had more time they could of came out better. A problem we had with the camera work was we thought that the shot was long enough but in reality when we went to edit it was difficult because we did not have enough shots. We crossed the 180 degree rule in the eye line match demo but it was not that bad. We did not have a very creative shot but the one I liked the most was the match action cut when Dee knocks over Tanya's books.

3. Edit
A challenge I had with the edit was not having enough shots to chose from. Another challenge was having boring angles because we did not focus on coverage. In the edit for our eyeline match demo I had to make sure where they looked was where the camera was going to. It was a difficult edit mainly because of the amount of shots we had.